Expedition Modded Jeeps - Let's see 'em!!
It's better than my first hack at video! But how much feedback do you really want?
Let me just lay this out there: Because of the way you've built the video, with continual music, continual POV video, and no story line or varying camera angles or B-roll, this reminds me of a fireplace video. You know, you put it on, then go clean the house while it plays, glancing at the screen now and again. But, lacking a story and engaging scenes, there's nothing to cause you to sit and watch for half an hour. It's on just to provide background noise. I can get a lot more specific but, honestly, I do not want to kill your ego. If you want ideas, I'll offer some. If not, I'll shut up.
Let me just lay this out there: Because of the way you've built the video, with continual music, continual POV video, and no story line or varying camera angles or B-roll, this reminds me of a fireplace video. You know, you put it on, then go clean the house while it plays, glancing at the screen now and again. But, lacking a story and engaging scenes, there's nothing to cause you to sit and watch for half an hour. It's on just to provide background noise. I can get a lot more specific but, honestly, I do not want to kill your ego. If you want ideas, I'll offer some. If not, I'll shut up.

It's better than my first hack at video! But how much feedback do you really want?
Let me just lay this out there: Because of the way you've built the video, with continual music, continual POV video, and no story line or varying camera angles or B-roll, this reminds me of a fireplace video. You know, you put it on, then go clean the house while it plays, glancing at the screen now and again. But, lacking a story and engaging scenes, there's nothing to cause you to sit and watch for half an hour. It's on just to provide background noise. I can get a lot more specific but, honestly, I do not want to kill your ego. If you want ideas, I'll offer some. If not, I'll shut up.
Let me just lay this out there: Because of the way you've built the video, with continual music, continual POV video, and no story line or varying camera angles or B-roll, this reminds me of a fireplace video. You know, you put it on, then go clean the house while it plays, glancing at the screen now and again. But, lacking a story and engaging scenes, there's nothing to cause you to sit and watch for half an hour. It's on just to provide background noise. I can get a lot more specific but, honestly, I do not want to kill your ego. If you want ideas, I'll offer some. If not, I'll shut up.

i started to watch it , then skipped half way through and still same thing so i skipped 3/4 through and still driving no words spoken so i stopped it ( its nice that you enjoyed the trip with your jeep following a pick up truck but it has nothing to realy keep you interested . No Danger will robinsons ! ( not to bust your nut) but watch marks videos.
They have a whole purpose behind the trip and explaining to all what he is doing or where he is heading as he travels . Iits rugged terains and very scenic with stops and exploring the scenic areas . Some times not knowing if his jeep might end up over the cliff or close to it . Id kill the music and start with that, or at least have it softly playing behind words at some point along your journey . Thats a day driving in nh to get to the store for groceries at some level . Its nice to have for your memories but you must get to work on this
have you tried sky diving ? Not to discourage you from continuing videos just explain where and what your doing along the way is a must . Id rather hear the sound of the 3.6 motor and the sound of dirt and rocks turning over . the splash sound of the mud puddle hitting the plastic rather than all music _ anyone care to watch me drive to wal mart ? it only takes 15 min. just kidding.
Last edited by jeepmojo; Jan 12, 2016 at 06:32 PM.
I get bored watching my own videos! It's tough not to get bored. My marketing folks at work tell me the average person tunes out on a video in about 2.5 minutes (they were fighting with me over my 4 minute work video!).
As for personal videos, I've made them myself over the years and I know how much editing time goes into each minute of finished product (about an hour), and all I can say about Mark's videos is "wow, great work, and MAN do you have more free time than I do!" (which is to say, I'm jealous!)
But Mark's vids keep me watching. Great mix of action, stills, people, jeeps, scenery, etc. There was one where I'm pretty sure he used the static sound made when one keys the mic on the CB as his scene change sound between stills. It was either really cleaver or I'm dilusional.
As for personal videos, I've made them myself over the years and I know how much editing time goes into each minute of finished product (about an hour), and all I can say about Mark's videos is "wow, great work, and MAN do you have more free time than I do!" (which is to say, I'm jealous!)
But Mark's vids keep me watching. Great mix of action, stills, people, jeeps, scenery, etc. There was one where I'm pretty sure he used the static sound made when one keys the mic on the CB as his scene change sound between stills. It was either really cleaver or I'm dilusional.
I like the feedback. In all honesty I got irritated with youtube, hence the continual music. I know in the future I'll do shorter videos as this is just too much, and try to have some talking and different angles. Hoping to work on it some more this year. If you wouldn't mind giving me more feedback I'd appreciate it, but maybe we could talk through pm.
Your first point about getting irritated with YouTube suggests to me that you're using their tools to edit the video. Which certainly explains your results. So, my first suggestion is to buy a proper video editor. My first 50 or so videos were edited in the various free editors you can find out there. Windows Movie Maker and Windows Live Movie Maker (both have strong and weak points that make using both at times helpful). There were a number of other applications I needed to do utility work like convert video formats, edit still images (I still use a couple very old versions of Jasc PaintShop Pro for all of my still editing--they have the basic tools for image editing, and I don't do any of the fancy PhotoShop manipulations to my still images). The problem with the free editors was the limit on tracks (music, voice, video, sound effects, etc). I eventually picked up a copy of CyberLink PowerDirector and it is really nice. I can have as many tracks as I want. Here is an image of my last video (ABDSP Pt 2), to give you an idea of how powerful this editor is ...
First off, the editor is very fast. My old editors could easily spend 5-10 minutes processing a bit of GoPro video before I could do anything with it. Shorter segments were quicker, longer segments were much slower (I'll come back to those longer segments). With PowerDirector, note that I have a primary video track and secondary video track (mostly I use that to store a segment of video I'm working on until ready to drop it onto the primary track). There is a sound effects track (none in use on that image), a microphone track (my voice over audio) and a music track.
Note that line that runs the duration of each of the audio tracks. That line is the level that audio is playing right at that moment. I can add an adjustment point and move it up and down. Add a second and I can have the sound increase/decrease as high and for as long as I need during transitions (say, moving from music to voice over, but keeping the music as a lower level). I can also do the same thing with the audio tracks for the video segments.
Speaking of audio tracks for the video segments: I am not locked into the audio that came with the video. I can delete the audio, replace it, use it with a different video segment, etc. This is probably the most powerful tool in PowerDirector because it allows you to get rid of all that unnecessary conversation, doors slamming, street traffic, etc, that a microphone will pick up (I'll come back to that, too). It also allows me to drop in sound effects (such as the wind.wav file, which was a slight modification of the wind.mp3 that's available for free download from YouTube's audio library--I use the free audio editor Audacity to edit audio tracks). To be more specific, the opening sunrise segments (which include both stills and one video, BTW) were made on three different days in two different locations. But I wanted to set the mood of a new day, so juxtaposed those to suit that purpose. I varied the wind level a little to make the viewer think they are different segments. And the wind on a couple is actually with stills--but I use an actual video later (the crow flying from the palm) to convince the viewer otherwise. Pretty tricky of me, huh? BTW, a link you'll find handy: https://www.youtube.com/audiolibrary/music
If you look at the left, the bottom two tracks are the microphone (voice over is how I use that) and music. You can actually drop any audio into that, to include stripping audio off a video and using it down there. But let's set that aside for the moment. Note how the music starts in the middle range, then fades as the voice over starts. The voice over I recorded with the microphone/recorder I use with my HDSLR (It's a Zune H4N recorder). But, remember that "strip audio from a video"? If you don't have something to record your audio, use your GoPro (or whatever action camera flavor you have). Take it out of the case (I'll come back to that later), and just read a written script well after the trip. Drop it into the PowerDirector, unlink the audio and video, then shift the audio where you need it and delete the video you don't need.
Now you have a voice over. At this point let me add that you'll note that during my videos a lot of voice overs occur during parts while we're driving. This is helpful for several reasons: As I replay the video later, it allows me to remember where we are and what is occurring. And usually that commentary is well-suited to include in the video, reducing the need to make a voice over. But, and here is a word of caution: Every bit of video you record needs to be watched and listened to. So, if you turn on a GoPro and let it run for an hour, swap cards, record another hour, etc, you'll have a lot of boring stuff to watch when you get home. Better to turn hit record when you think you need it. Yes, you'll miss some cool commentary and events. But, if the lead driver is your friend, he should be giving you a heads up to start recording ("Mark, cool view at this next turn, start the GoPro"). So, how do you keep those GoPro batteries from dying? If you turn it off between uses, it take too long to turn back on. I've found that an old Nuvi power cord works fine to let me keep the windshield mounted GoPro turned on. So I just have to touch the record button and we're set. Also, if something is said that I miss, I'll ask whoever said it to please repeat for the recording. This usually takes a little explanation for them: They often say it so it sounds fake as opposed to the first time you heard it. But if you do this regularly with the same group, they quickly grasp what you're doing and cooperate. I do carry a second GoPro and turn it off and on as needed. Besides serving as back-up (the darned things overheat pretty easily), it's the one I grab when I want a shot looking out to the left or right, etc.
Thinking of GoPros and audio: I have one of my GoPros mounted in a skeleton housing, the other in a waterproof housing. The one in the skeleton housing can be plugged in to power at all times. It also does a much better job recording audio--such as background engine noise, etc. I noticed the few times we could hear engine noise on your video that it was pretty muffled. That's characteristic of the housing that comes with the GoPros, which is fine for mounting in dusty or wet places (outside the Jeep), but undesirable when windshield mounted. Pick up a skeleton housing and if you mount your GoPro outside, have the original housing handy to swap it into. Then, remember that bit about unlinking video and audio? Well, you can do that with your GoPro footage to ensure that even that footage recorded with the original housing has better background sounds.
An aside, BTW. There are two parts to watching a movie: Video and audio. You need to work hard on both.
Another aside, BTW. Transitions. PowerDirector comes with a bunch of the really silly stuff--hearts, flips, whirling around, etc. Watch pro-made movies and notice that they hardly ever use transitions. It's very amateurish to do so. Period. The only transition you ever need is the fade to represent the passage of time, and even that isn't used hardly at all. On my videos you'll see that the only time I use transitions is during the showing of stills--I think it makes that viewing a little less jarring. I also have a few at the very ending slides, my thinking being that I'm easing the viewer out of his doldrums, LOL. Basically, I try to emulate what I might expect to see from the latest Star Wars movie (no, I haven't seen it yet), etc.
Another thought. I noticed in a few places that your video quality had a lot of artifacts crop up. I struggled with that for a very long time, and if you search you'll find tons of info on dealing with it. The GoPros come with an editor that supposedly deals with it. It doesn't, and it's a very difficult editor to use. I hate it and avoid it. Some folks say to decompress the video, making a 300 megabyte segment into a 3 gigabyte segment. I have a monster desktop computer with so many multi-terabyte hard drives I've lost count, but I quickly use up space if I decompress the videos like that. And, besides, I found that also didn't solve the problem. Ultimately, what I found is that I put all of the original files and edited files (still images) that I plan to use on one fast hard drive. I created the video dragging and dropping those files into PowerDirector. Then, when I produce the final HD video product, I save it to another fast hard drive. I turn off the option to view the production as it renders, and also shut down any other applications I may have open (though I leave background tasks alone). I then don't use the computer for anything else until the rendering is done. And I almost always create a video without those artifacts. If that doesn't work, then I resort to that GoPro software to select, crop and output the video. Thankfully, that's rarely needed.
One last final thought. PowerDirector allows lots of editing of video. Color balance, exposure, etc. It also allows you to play a video backwards (super useful to fade from out of focus to in-focus since doing that in reverse is way easier in real life, then running it backwards to give the blur to in-focus effect you were really after). It also allows changing speed of playback, but use sparingly because quality suffers unless you adapt the recording frame rates (60 FPS recording plays back very nicely at half speed and the usual 30FPS playback). Anyway, there's lots you can do with videos, but watch out for that goofy stuff--use it sparingly if at all (I have a couple funny segments where I've sped up the action in an attempt to add a touch of humor).
Anyway, I've gotten pretty long-winded. I'm open to questions, but do remind again: I'm a beginner at this and still have a lot to learn about video. For me it's a fascinating new area to explore.
Last edited by Mark Doiron; Jan 13, 2016 at 12:25 AM.
I totally enjoy your videos mark! the video, audio, commentary. The works. Your videos inspire me to get out in the backcountry more! Maybe if you were bouncing around on one pile of rocks all day looking at the exact same scenery with a cooler full of beer screamin YEEEEEE HAAAAA, and acting like a total douche would be more appropriate for many on here!
I totally enjoy your videos mark! the video, audio, commentary. The works. Your videos inspire me to get out in the backcountry more! Maybe if you were bouncing around on one pile of rocks all day looking at the exact same scenery with a cooler full of beer screamin YEEEEEE HAAAAA, and acting like a total douche would be more appropriate for many on here! 

For sure. Its hard to find a middle ground. Expedition portal is full of elitist know it alls, this place is full of People who put 20 kms on their jeeps in a weekend. Where is a place to the regular people who travel using their vehicles?
Cineform studio (free on GoPro's website under the software tab) is the best I found for editing go pro video, if you use multiple types of cameras I recommend running your go pro footage through cineform first to remove the fish eye and clean up the video (including length of scenes) you can use another software to make the final cut but go pro footage really does look better through their own software.
Ex: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=vctM9vj0vtk
As opposed to one of my earlier videos that I didn't use cineform studio to edit the footage first:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=xckak_ix4L8
(Second video is a little long but you get the idea)
Both videos filmed in the exact same camera
Ex: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=vctM9vj0vtk
As opposed to one of my earlier videos that I didn't use cineform studio to edit the footage first:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=xckak_ix4L8
(Second video is a little long but you get the idea)
Both videos filmed in the exact same camera
Last edited by ScubaDude; Jan 13, 2016 at 08:35 AM.






